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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of people who support various political parties before and after the general election in a country. There are five parties Conservative, Green Party, Labour, Liberal Democrats and undecided group. Overall, throughout the year before and after the election Conservatives maintained vast majority even though, popularity reduced after 12 months of election. However, undecided group percentage got raised remarkably. Firstly, Conservatives won the election and they joined with Liberal Democrats and formed a government. Moreover, one month before the election Liberal Democrats were 19% but gradually reduced to 10%after 6 months and then to 8% after 12 months of election. Meanwhile, the Green and Labour Party sustained same popularity that is 10% and 26% respectively, before and after election unlikely, after 12 months of election Green party reduced majority towards 5% whereas, Labour Party expanded to 32% significantly.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of
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people
who support various political
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parties
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before
and after the general
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election
in a country. There are five
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parties
Conservative, Green
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Party
,
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Labour
, Liberal Democrats and undecided group.

Overall
, throughout the year
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before
and after the
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election
Conservatives maintained vast majority
even though
, popularity
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reduced
after 12
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months
of
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election
.
However
, undecided group percentage
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got
raised
remarkably
.

Firstly
, Conservatives won the
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election and
they
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joined
with Liberal Democrats and formed a
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government
.
Moreover
, one
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month
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before
the
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election
Liberal Democrats were 19%
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but
gradually
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reduced
to 10%after 6
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months
and then to 8% after 12
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months
of election.

Meanwhile, the Green and Labour
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Party
sustained same popularity
that is
10% and 26%
respectively
,
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before
and after
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election
unlikely, after 12
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months
of
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election
Green
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party
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reduced
majority towards 5% whereas, Labour
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Party
expanded to 32%
significantly
.
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4 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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