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The table below compares the number of British students in one primary school of England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English,in the 3 years 2009,2012 and 2015.

The table below compares the number of British students in one primary school of England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in the 3 years 2009, 2012 and 2015. 0EAAq
The table illustrates the number if British students of a primary school of England who spoke different languages along with English in 2009, 2012 and 2015. Overall, we can see that, in 2009 Spanish and no other language were spoken the most by the students and two other languages were spoken the least. In 2009, the British students spoke no other language, they spoke only English at that time and their number was highest which was 80. On the other hand, only 22 students spoke two other languages at that time, which was extremely lowest. However, in 2012 Spanish and no other languages were spoken by 40 students and their number was same. Though, in 2015, 100 students spoke German language which was higher than who spoke only English language and their number was 20. Moreover, Spanish language was spoken by 71 students and two other language were spoken by 88 students respectively in 2015. In 2009, only 22 students talk two other languages but this number increased in 2012 and 44 students spoke two other languages at that time.
The table illustrates the
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IELTS academic The table below compares the number of British students in one primary school of England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in the 3 years 2009, 2012 and 2015.

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6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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