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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of people who support various political parties before and after the general election in a country. There are five parties Conservative, Green Party, Labour Party, Liberal Democrats and undecided group. Overall, throughout the year before and after the election Conservatives maintained vast majority even though, popularity reduced after 12 months of election. However, undecided group percentage got raised remarkably. Firstly, Conservatives won the election and they joined with Liberal Democrats and formed a government. Moreover, one month before the election Liberal Democrats were 19% but gradually reduced to 10%after 6 months and then to 8% after 12 months of election. Meanwhile, the Green and Labour Party sustained same popularity that is 10% and 26% respectively, before and after election unlikely, after 12 months of election Green party reduced majority towards 5% whereas, Labour Party expanded to 32% significantly. Unfortunately, undecided group shows a massive majority after the election from 4% to 20%.

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