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The illustration describes current plan of an airport, as well as the plan after changes next year.

The illustration describes current plan of an airport, as well as the plan after changes next year. pKRJm
The illustration describes current plan of an airport, as well as the plan after changes next year. Overall, the most striking feature of the diagram is the increased number of gateways. In addition, the airport will have more facilities for customers. Currently, the airport have one door for arrivals, after passing through which the travellers can do nothing but proceeding to the passport control and customs. Regarding the departures, this part of the airport have a cafe and a check-in. Similar to the arrival sector, the visitors can exit through one door. Finally, the airport have 8 gateways which are accessible with walkways. The redevelopment will dramatically change the structure of the airport. In addition to the new 10 gateways, a sky train will be put in use for customers. Both arrival and departures will be done through 2 doors, while new facilites will be added to both sectors. To illustrate, the arrival sector will now have a cafe and ATM with a new car hire compartment close to the entrance. Furthermore, a new bag drop will be constructed in departures section.
The illustration
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plan of an
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airport
,
as well
as the plan after
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changes
next
year.

Overall
, the most striking feature of the diagram is the increased number of gateways.
In addition
, the
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airport
will have more facilities for customers.

Currently
, the
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airport
have one door for
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arrivals
, after passing through which the
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travellers
can do nothing
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but
proceeding to the passport control and customs. Regarding the departures, this part of the
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airport
have a
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cafe
and a
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check
-in. Similar to the
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arrival
sector, the visitors can exit through one door.
Finally
, the
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airport
have 8 gateways which are accessible with walkways.

The redevelopment will
dramatically
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change
the structure of the
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airport
.
In addition
to the
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new
10 gateways, a sky train will
be put
in
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use
for customers. Both
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arrival
and departures will
be done
through 2 doors, while
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new
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facilites
will be
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added
to both sectors. To illustrate, the
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arrival
sector will
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now
have a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
and ATM with a
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new
car hire compartment close to the entrance.
Furthermore
, a
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new
bag drop will
be constructed
in departures section.

IELTS academic The illustration describes current plan of an airport, as well as the plan after changes next year.

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4 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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