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You are not a woman who you know who is a man and a man who you love you and is a great i MyoYo
The given model above illustrates export earnings of a nation in billion dollars from 5 sections between 2015 and 2016. The table highlights percent modifications in per category of smuggle wages in 2016 in contrast to 2015. Overall, it is worth noting that the most dominant export earnings in both years was petroleum production and also engineered commodities. While, the figures for the most profitable good, from 2015 to 2016, was textiles
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model above illustrates export earnings of a nation in
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dollars from 5 sections between 2015 and 2016. The table highlights percent modifications in per category of smuggle wages in 2016
in contrast
to 2015.
Overall
, it is worth noting that the most dominant export earnings in both years was petroleum production and
also
engineered commodities. While, the figures for the most profitable
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good
, from 2015 to 2016, was textiles
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IELTS academic You are not a woman who you know who is a man and a man who you love you and is a great i

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  American English
1 paragraphs
71 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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