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Different purpose ranking in each region

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The bar charts compare the differences in three purposes of using water in six regions. It can be clearly seen that there are noticeable discrepancies in the proportions of each objectives utilizing water in each area. According to the graph, agricultural use is the largest number of water consumption in Central Asia, Africa, Southeast Asia, and South America at 88%, 84%, 81%, and 71% respectively. Moreover, the highest figure for domestic purpose is 19% in South America, followed by Africa consuming less than the former location by 10%. Significantly, the water is consumed for this objective at the same proportion, 7%, in both areas in Asia. In addition, only Southeast Asia utilizes this resource for industrial use over one-fifth, compared to the three regions mentioned above. In contrast, the percentages of the three purposes in North America and Europe are the same pattern of ranking order. The majority of water utilization, approximately half, is for industrial benefits. Also, both locations use water for their agricultures over 30% and the rest is for domestic purpose.
The bar charts compare the differences in three
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of using
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water
in six regions.

It can be
clearly
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that there are noticeable discrepancies in the proportions of each
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objectives
utilizing
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water
in each area.

According to the graph, agricultural
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use
is the largest number of
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water
consumption in Central Asia, Africa, Southeast Asia, and South America at 88%, 84%, 81%, and 71%
respectively
.
Moreover
, the highest figure for domestic
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purpose
is 19% in South America, followed by Africa consuming less than the former location by 10%.
Significantly
, the
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water
is consumed
for this objective at the same proportion, 7%, in both areas in Asia.
In addition
,
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only
Southeast Asia utilizes this resource for industrial
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use
over one-fifth, compared to the three regions mentioned above.

In contrast
, the percentages of the three
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purposes
in North America and Europe are the same pattern of ranking order. The majority of
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water
utilization, approximately half, is for industrial benefits.
Also
, both locations
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use
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water
for their
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agricultures
over 30% and the rest is for domestic
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