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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of a several types of energy, which are consumed by citizens in The United Kingdom(UK). The figures are given in two years which are 2000 and 2010. It can be seen that the consumption of petrol significantly was decreased in 2010, whereas the amount in other sources had changed slightly. Apparently, the usage of coal, gas and petrol were popular in The UK, those were used by 30%, 29. 5% and 29%, in 2000. However, in 2010, there were a small growth in coal and gas, which were 31% and 30% in order. Eventually, the used of petrol noticeably dropped to 20%. Lastly, solar had an upward trend, in 2000, it was used by 6. 5%, but in 2010 people tended to apply solar energy to their households, occupied by 10%. The rest of was shared in other kinds of energy, presented 5. 0% in 2000 and 9. 0% in 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of a several types of energy, which
are consumed
by citizens in The United Kingdom(UK). The figures are
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given
in two years which are 2000 and 2010.

It can be
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seen
that the consumption of petrol
significantly
was decreased
in 2010, whereas the amount in other sources had
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changed
slightly
.

Apparently
, the usage of coal, gas and petrol were popular in The UK, those were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
by 30%, 29. 5% and 29%, in 2000.
However
, in 2010, there were a
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small
growth in coal and gas, which were 31% and 30% in order.
Eventually
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
of petrol
noticeably
dropped to 20%.

Lastly
, solar had an upward trend, in 2000, it was
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used
by 6. 5%,
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but
in 2010
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
tended to apply solar energy to their households, occupied by 10%. The rest of
was shared
in other kinds of energy, presented 5. 0% in 2000 and 9. 0% in 2010.
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