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The table below show the questionnaire about the opinions of club members and general public for the new theater in one town in 2012.

The table below show the questionnaire about the opinions of club members and general public for the new theater in one town in 2012. ox6pw
The given table illustrates the questionnaire about the club members and whole of the public about the new theater related to one town on 2012. Overall, almost most of the club members felt excellent with the ne theater in quality, information about plays and facilities, Whereas general public merely found the information sector excellent. With regard to production quality, club members felt more excellent related to this about 70%, Whereas it was merely 3% less in general public opinion. Nearly the same amount of people in both group felt satisfactory toward production quality. However only 13% and 15% in club members and general public thought that the quality was poor. The questionnaire about information about plays given information that most of the general public felt excellent that contributes 88%, while this was 72% in club members voted. Moreover, 10% in public felt satisfactory related to this category, while this amount almost doubled at 23% in club members. However, both groups idea related to the poor function of information was under 10%. In facilities that provided in new theater, it can be observed that club members found it much more excellent than public, which contributes 75% in compare with 55%. In addition, general public found these facilities more poor than satisfactory with 26% voted poor facilities rather than 19%. Lastly, club members contributes 23% for satisfactory aspect of facilities in theater and only minor amount went to poor function.
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and whole of the
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about the new
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theater
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related
to one town on 2012.
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felt
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excellent
with the
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theater
in
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quality
,
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information
about plays and facilities, Whereas general
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public
merely
found the
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information
sector excellent.

With regard to production
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,
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members
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felt
more
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excellent
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related
to this about 70%, Whereas it was
merely
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public
opinion.
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people
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felt
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toward production
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thought
that the
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quality
was poor.

The questionnaire about
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information
about plays
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given
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information
that most of the general
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public
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felt
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excellent
that contributes 88%, while this was 72% in
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club
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members
voted.
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public
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felt
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satisfactory
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related
to this category, while this amount almost doubled at 23% in
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club
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members
.
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to the
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function of
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information
was under 10%.

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theater
, it can
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club
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found it much more
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than
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, which contributes 75% in compare with 55%.
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, general
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public
found these facilities more
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than
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with 26% voted
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poor
facilities
rather
than 19%.
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,
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contributes 23% for
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aspect of facilities in
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and
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only
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poor
function.
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IELTS academic The table below show the questionnaire about the opinions of club members and general public for the new theater in one town in 2012.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
238 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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