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The given chart illustrates the percentage of the populations of India, China, the USA, Japan in a period of 50 years. Also, the chart narrates the projections till 2050. Overall, it is clear from the graph that china had the highest proportion of the population in this period of years, but estimates show that India will take a lead by 2050. In India, 15 % of the population had acquired by India in 1950. But after fifty years the proportion of the population was increased by only 4 % in 2000. The percentage will increase by 2 % in 2050 from the projection. More than a quarter fraction had reached by China in 1950. But after a few years, the amount of percentage had decreased to a little under a quarter. But the number will be decreased by 5 %. The USA had only 10% in 1950, 12 % in 2000, and number will increase by just 1% in 2050. In Japan, only 5% had been reached by Japan in 1950. After, 50 years the was decreasing to 2000. But in 2050, the amount will also decrease by 1 %.
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of India, China, the USA, Japan in a period of 50 years.
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, the chart narrates the projections till 2050.
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in this period of years,
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that India will take a lead by 2050.

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had acquired by India in 1950.
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after fifty years the proportion of the
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4 % in 2000. The percentage will increase by 2 % in 2050 from the projection. More than a quarter fraction had reached by China in 1950.
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1% in 2050.

In Japan,
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