Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

percentage of male and female teachers in six different education centers

percentage of male and female teachers in six different education centers PREqj
The chart compares the percentage of male and female teachers in different educational settings from nursery school to university. Significant differences between men and women are evident. women held nearly all of the teaching posts in nursery and primary schools and the majority of posts in secondary schools(approximately 56% ). They held the same percentage of posts as the men at college level. However, a smaller proportion of women held teaching positions at training institutes, and at universities, female lectures were outnumbered by male by roughly 2 to 1. For men the pattern of employment was the reverse. only 2% of nursery school teachers and 10% of primary teachers wear men. They were more equally represented at secondary and college level. However, a significantly higher percentage of university lectures were male.
The chart compares the percentage of male and female teachers in
different
educational settings from nursery school to university. Significant differences between
men
and women are evident.
women
held
nearly
all of the
teaching posts in nursery and primary schools and the majority of posts in secondary schools(approximately 56%
)
. They held the same percentage of posts as the
men
at college level.
However
, a smaller proportion of women held teaching positions at training institutes, and at universities, female lectures
were outnumbered
by male by roughly 2 to 1. For
men
the pattern of employment was the reverse.
only
2% of nursery school teachers and 10% of primary teachers wear
men
. They were more
equally
represented at secondary and college level.
However
, a
significantly
higher percentage of university lectures were male.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic percentage of male and female teachers in six different education centers

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6.5band
    The chart shows what graduated from one university.
    The chart provides information about the destination of Anthropology graduates and their salaries after 5 years of work are mentioned in the given table. Overall, it is apparent that full-time work was the most popular among graduates, whereas the graduates who work in the government sector have th...
  • 6.5band
    The bar chart shows the percentage of what people in four countries spent their money on in 2009.
    The bar chart demonstrates the proportions of how much residents of four countries (the United Stated, Canada, Great Britain and Japan) paid for different products and services in 2009. In each of the four nations, most of the money went to eating and drinking, accommodation, and transportation, wh...
  • 6band
    bar chart comparison for 2015 and 2016
    The chart represents the difference in value of exports of a Country in various categories, as of the years 2015 and 2016. As a whole, the graph tells us that 2016 has witnessed an increase in exports, and only Gems and Jewelry have incurred losses of about a percentage of 5. 18%. On the other han...
  • 5.5band
    TRANSPORT PREFERENCE AMONG YOUNG PEOPLE
    The bar chart illustrate the preferred means of land transportation(car, motor, bicycle) by young people in Great Britain, United States, France and Italy in a year. Generally, most young people in Italy, United States and Great Britain prefer to use cars with the exception of France, where the use ...
  • 6band
    IELTS Writing Task 1: band 9 map answer
    The two maps describe how a small town named Islip is planned to change in comparison with its current layout. Overall, the town has been completely transformed after the constructions of several facilities. However the main road as well as the school and the park will remain largely unchanged. Cu...
  • 6band
    IELTS Writing task 1: Maps of the Islip town
    The two maps describe how a small town named Islip is planned to change in comparison with its current layout. Overall, the future town will be much more modernized and equipped with new facilities than the present town, mainly in the northern part of town. On the current map, this centre has a ma...