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The chart shows what graduated from one university.summerise the information

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The chart provides information about the destination of Anthropology graduates and their salaries after 5 years of work are mentioned in the given table. Overall, it is apparent that full-time work was the most popular among graduates, whereas the graduates who work in the government sector have the highest percentage and they are highly paid as well. From an overall perspective, it can be seen that more than half of the total percentage (52%) of graduates did full-time work after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The percentage of doing both the part-time work and post grad study has experienced the least as only 5% chose it. The number of students who chose full-time post-grad study is surprisingly equal to those whose choices are unknown. Turning to the data of the salaries, it is evident that 50% of the students are earning $100, 000 from the government sectors, followed by 40% of the freelance consultants who earn the same.
The chart provides information about the destination of Anthropology
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and their salaries after 5 years of
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are mentioned
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table.

Overall
, it is apparent that full-time
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was the most popular among
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graduates
, whereas the
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who
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work
in the
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government
sector have the highest
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percentage and
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highly
paid
as well
.

From an
overall
perspective, it can be
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seen
that more than half of the total percentage (52%) of
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graduates
did full-time
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work
after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The percentage of doing both the part-time
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work
and post grad study has experienced the least as
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only
5% chose it. The number of students who chose full-time post-grad study is
surprisingly
equal to those whose choices are unknown.

Turning to the data of the salaries, it is evident that 50% of the students are earning $100, 000 from the
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government
sectors, followed by 40% of the freelance consultants who earn the same.
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