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The average of how energy is used in Australian household is shown in the first chart. It shows the percentage of Australian household energy use. Energy are being used in everyday-life, such as water heating, refrigeration, heating, cooling, lighting, and other appliances. Heating was the most usable energy. Then water heating was in the second place, and the usage of cooling was at the last point. Weather the percentage of heating is in the first rank, but it produced about 15 percent in greenhouse emissions. It did not create much emissions. But the energy used in water heating was the biggest in producing greenhouse gaseous. The other appliances was in the second rank as the producer of gas emissions in the household-life. As the result of the two chart, the percentage of usage in energy use does not conclude that it will produce more greenhouse gas emissions than other. But these percentage could be used as an information that every energy will have a bad impact even a percent.

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