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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of genders in various ages doing daily physical activity in Australia in the year 2010. Overall, the number of male involved in sport activities was higher than the female in all ages, except of the young group, where the representatives of fragile sex were high in amount. Young girls were more than boys by approximately 5%. Among the people aged 25 to 34 the percentage of men was around 49%, whereas female’s proportion was at the rate above 42%. In the genders aged from 35 to 44 years old, there was an enormous difference in the percentages, 39. 5% was female, while 52. 5% was male. Moreover, the same tendency could be noticed in the age group of individuals at the age of 45-54 and 55-64. In the categories of middle-aged people, who did regular physical activity was percentagewise from 43 to 45 percent among the females; on the other hand the change in the proportion of males was about 53 percent. The older people more than 65 years old were roughly at the same level, 47%.

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