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The chart below shows gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025.

The chart below shows gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20. . , and future projections for 2025. E33a3
The bar chart illustrates the data on major exports in Southland in 2000, 2016 and the estimated figures in 2025. Overall, while international tourism and dairy exports have generated more revenue since 2000, sales for meat products have experienced a downward trend. It is forecasted that by 2025, only the value of international tourism will continue to grow, whereas that of dairy and meat export industries will decline. Starting at just over 8 billion pounds, international tourism was by far the largest export in Southland in 2000. This figure has increased since then to the present number of nearly 9 billion pounds. Yet international tourism could not maintain its first rank, for it has been exceeded by dairy products with approximately 10 billion pounds of revenue. That is a dramatic improvement for a single industry, as dairy and meat were the two smaller exports in 2000, with just below 7 billion and 6 billion pounds of sales respectively. Meat export, however, has fallen to as low as 5. 5 billion pounds since 2000. According to future projections, international tourism will regain its former top position with around 10 billion pounds in 2025. This industry is estimated to be followed by dairy products, which may undergo a slight depreciation to a number of 9. 5 billion pounds in the same year. A downward trend is also likely to be observed in the figure for meat products, and this industry may generate a relatively small sum of money –only 5 billion pounds in 2025.
The bar chart illustrates the data on major
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exports
in Southland in 2000, 2016 and the estimated figures in 2025.

Overall
, while
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international
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tourism
and
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dairy
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exports
have generated more revenue since 2000, sales for
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meat
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products
have experienced a downward trend. It
is forecasted
that by 2025,
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only
the value of
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international
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tourism
will continue to grow, whereas that of
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dairy
and
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meat
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export
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industries
will decline.

Starting at
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just
over 8
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billion
pounds,
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international
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tourism
was by far the largest
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export
in Southland in 2000. This figure has increased since then to the present number of
nearly
9
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billion
pounds.
Yet
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international
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tourism
could not maintain its
first
rank, for it has
been exceeded
by
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dairy
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products
with approximately 10
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billion
pounds of revenue.
That is
a dramatic improvement for a single
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industry
, as
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dairy
and
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meat
were the two smaller
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exports
in 2000, with
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just
below 7
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billion
and 6
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billion
pounds of sales
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.
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Meat
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export
,
however
, has fallen to as low as 5. 5
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billion
pounds since 2000.

According to future projections,
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international
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tourism
will regain its former top position with around 10
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billion
pounds in 2025. This
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industry
is estimated
to
be followed
by
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dairy
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products
, which may undergo a slight depreciation to a number of 9. 5
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billion
pounds in the same year. A downward trend is
also
likely to
be observed
in the figure for
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meat
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products
, and this
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industry
may generate a
relatively
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small
sum of money –
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5
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billion
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