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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. 0AAO9
The maps illustrate the central part of the countryside called Islip at present and the projected development for the future. Overall, by the prognosis after a certain period of time the infrastructure will be better. The new buildings will be built and the road will be in the circular form and connect all facilities. At present in Islip town Centre exist small shops and instead of these venues new places will be provided to individuals such as the Bus Station, Shopping Centre and Car Park. The New housing will be infrastructure as well and the road from this facility will lead to the circular road. The rest of the shops will remain steady. However, the Main Road in the future will be replaced by the pedestrians only. In addition to the Housing, the New housing will be added. It is planned that in the future the park area will decrease by size, whereas the school’s area will increase. In the south-west of the town the dual carriageway will give an opportunity to extend the road and the number of visitors.
The maps illustrate the central part of the countryside called
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Islip
at present and the projected development for the future.

Overall
, by the prognosis after a certain period of time the infrastructure will be better. The
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new
buildings will
be built
and the
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road
will be in the circular form and connect all facilities.

At present in
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Islip
town
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Centre
exist
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small
shops and
instead
of these venues
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new
places will
be provided
to individuals such as the Bus Station, Shopping
Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.
Centre
and Car Park. The
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New
housing will be infrastructure
as well
and the
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road
from this facility will lead to the circular
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road
. The rest of the shops will remain steady.
However
, the Main
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Road
in the future will
be replaced
by the pedestrians
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only
.

In addition
to the Housing, the
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New
housing will be
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added
. It
is planned
that in the future the park area will decrease by size, whereas the school’s area will increase. In the south-west of the town the dual carriageway will give an opportunity to extend the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
and the number of visitors.

IELTS academic The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

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180 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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