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Analytical Paragraph for Class 10

Analytical Paragraph for Class 10 g550d
In this given table, It shows information regarding the employment of people from 3 age groups in many types of employment sector. People of age (18-25) mostly worked retail and other employment sectors. Whereas people from age group (25-40) were seen employed in health, local government, manufacturing and education sectors. People of age (40-60) worked the highest in manufacturing and local government sector. The lowest employment among all ages was seen in law, accountancy, agriculture and catering. While manufacturing, health and education were some most employing sectors. Overall, the youngest group contributed highest in the retail sector whereas middle group worked in other sector. The oldest group contributed the most in manufacturing sector.
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from 3
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age
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employment
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sector
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People
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age
(18-25)
mostly
worked retail and other
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employment
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sectors
. Whereas
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group
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seen
employed in health, local
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government
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manufacturing
and education
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sectors
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age
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government
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sector
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most employing
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sectors
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, the youngest
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group
contributed highest in the retail
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sector
whereas middle
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worked in other
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sector
. The oldest
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group
contributed the most in
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manufacturing
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sector
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IELTS academic Analytical Paragraph for Class 10

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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