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Writing task about manufacturing instant noodle

Writing task about manufacturing instant noodle PVmAX

I'm going to explain the eight steps in manufacturing instant noodles. By looking at the diagram, we can understand that it starts with collecting flour from the storage soils and mixing with water and oil. Then, the manufacturing system makes the dough into sheets, strips, and finally into a shape called noodle discs. After that, the noodle discs will be cooked with oil, dried, and contained into cups with vegetable and spices. These are the main features we can describe from the diagram. It is surprising that all of the steps to manufacture instant noodles are done without human's hand but only using the manufacturing system. However, by doing so, the factory can provide the same instant noodles' taste every time they manufacture it and make consumers feel satisfied by eating them. Also using the manufacturing system makes it efficient to save time. These are the contents I could describe from the diagram.

I'm going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 the eight steps in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufactureconstruction
manufacturing
 instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
. By looking at the diagram, we can understand that it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 with collecting flour from the storage soils and mixing with water and oil. Then, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufactureconstruction
manufacturing
 system This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 the dough into sheets, strips, and finally
 into a shape called You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 discs. After that, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 discs will be cooked
 with oil, dried, and contained into cups with vegetable and spices. These are the main features we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 from the diagram.

It is surprising that Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 steps to manufacture instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are done
 without human's hand This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 using the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufactureconstruction
manufacturing
 system. However
, by doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, the factory can provide the same instant noodles' taste every time they manufacture it and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 consumers feel satisfied by eating them.

Also
 using the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufactureconstruction
manufacturing
 system This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 it efficient to save time.

These are the contents I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 from the diagram. 