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The given bar chart elucidates the changes in proportion of youngsters studying in higher education across three countries in 2000, 2005 and 2010.

The given bar chart elucidates the changes in proportion of youngsters studying in higher education across three countries in 2000, 2005 and 2010. 0AoP5
The given bar chart elucidates the changes in proportion of youngsters studying in higher education across three countries in 2000, 2005 and 2010. Overall, what stand out from the bar chart is that country D had the highest proportion of students who studying in higher education. However, country B had the almost same percentage of students in higher education in all the given three years. To commence with, country A had 38% of students in higher education in 2004, as year passed, the proportion raised and recorded 62% after 10 years. Moreover, 46% of students studying in higher education in 2000 in country C, whereas the proportion slightly decreased after a decade. In addition, in 2005 and 2010 the percentage ratio was identical of students of higher education which was 52% in country C, while in 2008, the percentage accounted for 46% in country C. It is notable that country D had the highest proportion in regard to students who studying higher education which was 64% in 2007, 8% in 2005 and in 2010 the percentage was 80.
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changes
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proportion
of youngsters
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education
across three
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countries
in 2000, 2005 and 2010.

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country
D had the highest
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proportion
of
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students
who
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studying
in higher
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education
.
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,
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country
B had the almost same
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percentage
of
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students
in higher
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education
in all the
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given
three years.

To commence with,
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country
A had 38% of
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students
in higher
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education
in 2004, as year passed, the
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proportion
raised and recorded 62% after 10 years.
Moreover
, 46% of
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students
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studying
in higher
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education
in 2000 in
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country
C, whereas the
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proportion
slightly
decreased after a decade.

In addition
, in 2005 and 2010 the
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percentage
ratio was identical of
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students
of higher
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education
which was 52% in
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country
C, while in 2008, the
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percentage
accounted for 46% in
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country
C. It is notable that
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country
D had the highest
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proportion
in regard to
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students
who
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studying
higher
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education
which was 64% in 2007, 8% in 2005 and in 2010 the
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percentage
was 80.
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IELTS academic The given bar chart elucidates the changes in proportion of youngsters studying in higher education across three countries in 2000, 2005 and 2010.

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