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The procedure which instant noodles are manufactured

The procedure which instant noodles are manufactured 56q1D

As this diagram shows the procedure which manufactures instant noodles. On the whole, there are 8 procedures before we can see in supermarkets. At first, flour is carried by a truck and stored in Storage silos. When it is moved to the machine, it is supposed to mix with water and oil, and then the machine quickly begins to roll it. After it becomes Dough sheets, cut like strips. Also, They are formed like Discs.

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 the procedure which manufactures instant noodles. On the whole
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 we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
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 in supermarkets.

At first
, flour is carried
 by a truck and stored in Storage silos. When it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the machine, it is supposed
 to mix with water and oil, and then the machine quickly
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begins
 to roll it. After it becomes Dough sheets, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 like strips. Also
, They are formed
 like Discs. 