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The given maps illustrate development of town in 1990 and 2012.

The given maps illustrate development of town in 1990 and 2012. 2bJMJ
The rendered maps demonstrate the development of town called Frenton in between 1990 and 2012. In the initial stage, the playing fields and some trees were placed in North side in Frenton city In1990 yet, in 2012, this facilities were fully vanished and blocks of flats was constructed there. Interestingly, school and library was in same place in both maps. Subsequently, in 1990, cafe and park was built right side of high street on the contrary, hotel and golf course was present there in 2012. Probing ahead, the theater was replaced with cinema. Besides this, in the place of trees technopark was developed there. In 1990, shops was situated in North - East side but in 2012, it was replaced with supermarket. Lastly, the size of hospital was increased in 2012 as compared to 1990 in Frenton. Overall, it is crystal clear from provided maps that the school and library was in similar place.
The rendered maps demonstrate the development of town called
Frenton
in between 1990 and 2012. In the initial stage, the playing fields and
some
trees
were placed
in North side in
Frenton
city In1990
yet
, in 2012,
this
facilities were
fully
vanished and blocks of flats
was constructed
there.
Interestingly
, school and library was in same place in both maps.
Subsequently
, in 1990,
cafe
and park
was built
right side of high street
on the contrary
, hotel and golf course was present there in 2012. Probing ahead, the theater
was replaced
with cinema.
Besides
this, in the place of trees
technopark
was developed
there. In 1990, shops
was situated
in North
-
East side
but
in 2012, it
was replaced
with supermarket.
Lastly
, the size of hospital
was increased
in 2012 as compared to 1990 in
Frenton
.
Overall
, it is crystal
clear
from provided maps that the school and library was in similar place.
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IELTS academic The given maps illustrate development of town in 1990 and 2012.

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