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Main feature of manufacturing instant noodle

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According to the given diagram, we could learn that there are 8 steps to produce instant noodles in the factory. Firstly, flours are putted into the storage silos. Secondly, those are mixed with water and oil. Thirdly the mixture are expanded into dough sheet by rollers. After that, the sheet is cut into dough strips. Following to that step, noodles are transformed into noodle discs. When that is completed, those discs are cooked in oil, and dried. To finish with, vegetables and spices are added into noodles. Finally, those ate libeled and sold. I noticed that a lot of oil are use in the procedure of manufacturing instant noodles. oil are used both in step number 2 and step number 6.

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noodles
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, those are mixed
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oil
. Thirdly
 the mixture are expanded
 into dough sheet by rollers. After that, the sheet is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into dough strips. Following to that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
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noodles
are transformed
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noodle
 discs. When that is completed
, those discs are cooked
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oil
, and dried. To finish with, vegetables and spices are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
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noodles
. Finally
, those ate libeled and sold.

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use
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