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writing task 1 the informaton on Australian Burea of meteorology.

writing task 1 the informaton on Australian Burea of meteorology. 26Y9A
The given diagram represent the Australian Bureau of Meteorology which gets up-to-date knowledge about weather in order to produce reliable forecast. Overall, there are mainly four steps for forecasting, which includes incoming word, analysis and forecasting, preparing the show and announcement. As can be seen that, incoming intelligence has three sources. To start with, satellite collect details about it use of the satellite photo. Radar get details through radar screen and drifting buoys through the synoptic charts. A satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart which can use for analysis and forecasting. Moreover, computer used for the preparing the transmission and it is necessary prior to the broadcasting instruction to the public. The climate data broadcasting to the public in various three ways: Television, radio and telephone. transmission data to the people on TV by TV newspaper, Radio and telephone by the recorded announcement. To summarize, climate facts gathered by various types of sources and then analysis previously the publication to people.
The
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given
diagram represent the Australian Bureau of Meteorology which
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gets
up-to-date knowledge about weather in order to produce reliable forecast.
Overall
, there are
mainly
four steps for forecasting, which includes incoming word, analysis and forecasting, preparing the
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show
and announcement. As can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that, incoming intelligence has three sources. To
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start
with, satellite collect
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details
about it
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use
of the satellite photo. Radar
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get
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details
through radar screen and drifting buoys through the synoptic charts. A satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for analysis and forecasting.
Moreover
, computer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for the preparing the transmission and it is necessary prior to the broadcasting instruction to the public. The climate data broadcasting to the public in various three ways: Television, radio and telephone.
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transmission
data to the
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people
on TV by TV newspaper, Radio and telephone by the recorded announcement.
To summarize
, climate facts gathered by various types of sources and then analysis previously the publication to
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people
.
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IELTS academic writing task 1 the informaton on Australian Burea of meteorology.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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