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The diagram shows how to boil eggs

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the diagram represents the most vital stages in boiling eggs in the easiest way. There is a total of 6 steps starts with the uncooked eggs, then finishes when the eggs are ready to serve. First of all, the raw eggs should be placed at the bottom of a saucepan, make sure the eggs don't overcrowd in the pan. Then fill the pan with 3 cups of cold water until they were completely covered. Thirdly, Put the pan over high heat and bring water to a rolling boil for about 5 to 10 minutes. And puts a few salts to avoid the eggs from splits. Next, remove the pan from heat, then dry them by putting them in a large bowl filled with water and ice cubes. Finally, crack them slightly to easily peel the eggs. Taking a plate and serve them well.
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diagram represents the most vital stages in boiling eggs in the easiest way. There is a total of 6 steps
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starts
with the uncooked eggs, then finishes when the eggs are ready to serve.

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First of all
, the raw eggs should
be placed
at the bottom of a saucepan,
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make
sure the eggs don't overcrowd in the
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pan
. Then fill the
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pan
with
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3 cups
of
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cold
water until they were completely covered.
Thirdly
, Put the
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pan
over high heat and bring water to a rolling boil for about 5 to 10 minutes. And puts a few salts to avoid the eggs from splits.

Next
, remove the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pan
from heat, then dry them by putting them in a large bowl filled with water and ice cubes.
Finally
, crack them
slightly
to
easily
peel the eggs. Taking a plate and serve them well.

IELTS academic The diagram shows how to boil eggs

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3 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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