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The Table Below Gives Information About Rail Transport in Four Countries in 2007

The Table Below Gives Information About Rail Transport in Four Countries in 2007 MB6Nk

The table illustrates statistics about rail transport in UK, USA, Japan and Italy in 2007. As observed, Japan has the most crowded number of people using rail route, whereas USA carried the most goods. It remains that the smaller the country is, the more number of citizens will use the rail transports. As proved in japan with 27 million of people with the highest number, then scale down to UK, Italy and USA as 5. 9, 5. 5, 0. 3 million correspondingly. Japan also has a significantly better record in the average distance traveling with nearly 2000 kilometres, unlike USA at the least. Both UK and Italy nearly have the same statistics in the costumers served and cargo carried, with 22. 2 billion tons of the former and 21. 9 goes to the following. Unexpectedly, USA has goods carried the most with nearly 3 billion tons, in contrast with the other statistics, which is about 120 times bigger than the Japanese statistic.

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