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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the graph by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1 The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Pm1J
One of the greatest dangers to our atmosphere is climate change. Global warming involves to many things, and polluted gas from factories and transportation is one of them. The solutions are reuse, reduce and recycle so we can minimize the use of natural resources and help the climate change to be better Things that cause global warming is contaminated gas emissions, which is the most common thing that appears in our day-to-day work. For instance, the motorcycle we are using has discharged many tainted air pollution. Moreover, many big factories released many heavily polluted greenhouse gases. Deforestation is also very popular, because of the increasing population so there will be many lands being used to build buildings. For example, there are many forests in the countryside that are being destroyed to build residential areas. Some possible methods that required the government and individuals actions to make this solution work. The method is reuse, reduce and recycle. We reduce the use of land and resources, reuse bottles, plastic containers, and other items bought at grocery stores, recycle anything you can, this acquired high awareness people and people want the environment to be better. Another method needs the government to have more strict rules so there will be no more deforestation or any illegal deforestation. To conclude, climate change is among the major risks to our atmosphere. Many things caused it and they are very common so the climate change gets worse day-by-day. In the other hand, there are also many suggested methods to stop climate change.
One of the greatest
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dangers
to our atmosphere is
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climate
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change
. Global warming involves to
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many
things, and polluted gas from factories and transportation is one of them. The solutions are reuse,
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reduce
and recycle
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so
we can minimize the
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use
of natural resources and
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help
the
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climate
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change
to be
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better


Things that cause global warming
is contaminated
gas emissions, which is the most common thing that appears in our day-to-day work.
For instance
, the motorcycle we are using has discharged
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many
tainted air pollution.
Moreover
,
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many
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big
factories released
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many
heavily
polluted greenhouse gases. Deforestation is
also
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very
popular,
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because
of the increasing population
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so
there will be
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many
lands being
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used
to build buildings.
For example
, there are
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many
forests in the countryside that are being
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destroyed
to build residential areas.

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Some
possible
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methods
that required the
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government
and individuals actions to
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make
this solution work. The
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method
is reuse,
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reduce
and recycle. We
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reduce
the
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use
of land and resources, reuse bottles, plastic containers, and other items
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bought
at grocery stores, recycle anything you can, this acquired high awareness
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people
and
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people
want the environment to be better. Another
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method
needs the
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government
to have more strict
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rules
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so
there will be no more deforestation or any illegal deforestation.

To conclude
,
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climate
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change
is among the major
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risks
to our atmosphere.
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Many
things caused
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it and
they are
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very
common
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so
the
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climate
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change
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gets
worse day-by-day. In the other hand, there are
also
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many
suggested
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methods
to
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stop
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climate
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change
.
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IELTS academic WRITING TASK 1 The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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