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The diagrams below show the changes in the ground floor plan of an office between 2010 and 2016

The diagrams below show the changes in the ground floor plan of an office between 2010 and 2016 7do6

The map illustrate the transformation about floor plan in the 2010 and 2016 years. It is clear that the office building has been constructed in 2016 to replace for the old site. Overall, the office has built a large number of rooms. In 2010, in the north of the entrance door the reception desk had been rebuilt and it has in the south of entrance door in 2016. In 2010, on the left hand three office workers room and on the right hand two office workers room had been erected. One more building had been erected in the 2010.

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 the transformation about floor plan in the 2010 and 2016 years. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 building has been constructed
 in 2016 to replace for the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 site. Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 has built Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"manynumerous
a large number of
 rooms. In 2010, in the north of the entrance door the reception desk had been rebuilt and it has in the south of entrance door in 2016. In 2010, on the Did you mean the adjective "left-hand"?left-hand
left hand
 three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 workers room and on the Did you mean the adjective "right-hand"?right-hand
right hand
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 workers room had been erected
. One more building had been erected
 in the 2010. 