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The chart below shows information about student enrolments at three different English language schools for the year 2017. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows information about student enrolments at three different English language schools for the year 2017. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. A5E3
The chart encapsulates information about admissions of students in 2017, at various English language schools. The comparison is made between: New Zealand Centre for Languages (NZCL), Mayfair School of English (MSE), and Best Communication English Academy (BCEA). At a glance one can infer that the NZCL has had an exuberant amount of enrolments relative to MSE and BCEA. The maximum number of enrolments have been observed in the months of June-July, with a high figure of 683 admissions. On the other hand, MSE and BCEA show a great similarity in the maximum number of admissions, that is 472 and 491 respectively. However, the difference lies in their best months for admission. Nov-Dec proved to be a generous period for MSE in terms of student enrolments, whereas for BCEA, it was the Jan-Feb duration that was the most fruitful. In a nutshell, NZCL recorded the largest sum of enrolments in the year 2017, when compared to MSE and BCEA.
The chart encapsulates information about
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admissions
of students in 2017, at various English language schools. The comparison
is made
between: New Zealand
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Centre
for Languages (
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NZCL
), Mayfair School of English (MSE), and Best Communication English Academy (
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BCEA
).

At a glance one can infer that the
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NZCL
has had an exuberant amount of
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enrolments
relative to MSE and
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BCEA
. The maximum number of
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enrolments
have
been observed
in the months of June-July, with a high figure of 683
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admissions
.
On the other hand
, MSE and
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BCEA
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show
a great similarity in the maximum number of
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admissions
,
that is
472 and 491
respectively
.
However
, the difference lies in their best months for
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admission
. Nov-Dec proved to be a generous period for MSE in terms of student
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enrolments
, whereas for
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BCEA
, it was the Jan-Feb duration that was the most fruitful.

In a nutshell,
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NZCL
recorded the largest sum of
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enrolments
in the year 2017, when compared to MSE and
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BCEA
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about student enrolments at three different English language schools for the year 2017. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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