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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the graph by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The graph demonstrates the of guests to four worldwide galleries from a period of 35 years It is clear that Tokyo National museum has a big increase in several years while the national museum of Anthropology drop to the lowest the museum has a minority of tourist. Two museums have the most number of visitors are the Egyptian Museum and the Tokyo National Museum. Both of them are the highest in several years and have nearly 10000 tourists but Tokyo National museum have a dramatic increase from 1995 to 2015. Two galleries that have the least number of tourist are the Hermitage and National Museum of Anthropology. The Hermitage have higher tourist meanwhile the National Museum of Anthropology is going down day by day. Hermitage has 4000 visitors a year and they don't have much change but as I have mentioned the National Museum of Anthropology is going down and only have 2000 tourist
The graph demonstrates the of guests to four worldwide galleries from a period of 35 years

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that Tokyo
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has a
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big
increase in several years while the
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national
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museum
of
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Anthropology
drop to the lowest

the
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museum
has a minority of tourist.

Two
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museums
have the most number of visitors are the Egyptian
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and the Tokyo
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National
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Museum
. Both of them are the highest

in several years and have
nearly
10000 tourists
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Tokyo
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National
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museum
have a dramatic increase from 1995 to 2015.

Two galleries that have the least number of tourist are the Hermitage and
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National
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Museum
of
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Anthropology
. The Hermitage have
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higher


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tourist
meanwhile the
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National
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Museum
of
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Anthropology
is going down day by day. Hermitage has 4000 visitors a
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year and
they don't have

much
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change
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but
as I have mentioned the
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National
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of
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is going down and
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only
have 2000
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tourist

IELTS academic WRITING TASK 1 The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
153 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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  • WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the graph by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.