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Writing task 1. The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various activities...

Writing task 1. The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various activities. . . RR2JG
The given two charts clearly display the results of the relative popularity of a variety of leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. At the first glance, it is clear that watching TV was the most widely enjpyed occupation in the percentage over 10 years. As it presented in the charts, the majority of European adults were carried away by watching TV in the period, however, the rate experienced a decline of 2% from 1985 to 1995. In 1985, eating out was the second adored activity and this figure decreased dramatically to one third after 10 years. Interesting to note that talking with family was the same, indicated a reduce from 18% to 7% of total activities. Also more popular in 1995 was talking with friends, at 26 percent compared to 21 percent a decade earlier. Specially, it should be noted that the playing computer games had just appeared in 1995, wherein constituted 27 percent. Furthermore, in terms of other activities, the rate dropped to 4% from 1985 to 1995
The
given
two charts
clearly
display the results of the relative popularity of a variety of leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. At the
first
glance, it is
clear
that watching TV was the most
widely
enjpyed
occupation in the percentage over 10 years.

As it presented in the charts, the majority of European adults
were carried
away by watching TV in the period,
however
, the rate experienced a decline of 2% from 1985 to 1995. In 1985, eating out was the second adored activity and this figure decreased
dramatically
to one third after 10 years. Interesting to note that talking with family was the same, indicated a
reduce
from 18% to 7% of total activities.

Also
more popular in 1995 was talking with friends, at 26 percent compared to 21 percent a decade earlier.
Specially
, it should
be noted
that the playing computer games had
just
appeared in 1995, wherein constituted 27 percent.
Furthermore
, in terms of other activities, the rate dropped to 4% from 1985 to 1995
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IELTS academic Writing task 1. The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various activities. . .

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171 words
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