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Bar chart for export in 2015-2016

Bar chart for export in 2015-2016 gWGRd
The bar chart illustrates the differences in percentage of exports of a country for the year 2015-2016. The export categories mentioned in the chart are Petroleum Products, Engineering good, Gems and jewellery, Agricultural products and textiles. The table shows the increase and decrease of export categories in percentage change in values in the year 2015-2016. Petroleum products have risen to by an amount higher than 60 billion dollars in the year 2016 that is 3% when compared 2015. The textile export has seen a rise of 15. 24% which greater than all other exports for the year 2016 from 26 billion dollars to almost 31 billion. Whereas the Engineering goods export has increased in 2016 by 8. 5% from approximately 58 billion dollars to almost 61 billion dollars. The least rise in the export is for the Agricultural products. Only 0. 81% increase has been made for a year. The other exports have seen at least a little productivity, except for the Gems and jewellery export. There is a decrease of 5. 18% when compared with 2015. Overall, in 2016 the exports have had a decent increase when compared to 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the differences in percentage of
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exports
of a country for the
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year
2015-2016. The
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export
categories mentioned in the chart are Petroleum
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Products
, Engineering
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good
, Gems and
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jewellery
, Agricultural
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products
and textiles.

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The
table
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the increase and decrease of
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export
categories in percentage
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change
in values in the
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year
2015-2016.

Petroleum
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products
have risen to by an amount higher than 60
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billion
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dollars
in the
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year
2016
that is
3% when compared 2015. The textile
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export
has
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seen
a rise of 15. 24% which greater than all other
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exports
for the
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year
2016 from 26
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billion
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dollars
to almost 31
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billion
.
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the Engineering
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goods
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export
has increased in 2016 by 8. 5% from approximately 58
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billion
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dollars
to almost 61
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billion
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dollars
. The least rise in the
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export
is for the Agricultural
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products
.
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Only
0. 81% increase has
been made
for a year.

The other
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have
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seen
at least a
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little
productivity,
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except for
the Gems and
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jewellery
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export
. There is a decrease of 5. 18% when compared with 2015.

Overall
, in 2016 the
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exports
have had a decent increase when compared to 2015.
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