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The bar charts below show the marriage

The bar charts below show the marriage Bwa6p
Two given bar charts provide information about marriages and divorces for eight different countries in 1981 and 1994. Overall, it can be clearly seen that statistics of marriages dramatically higher than divorces. However, almost in every country figures of weddings were larger in 1981, for annulments numbers are various. As it presented, quantity of marriages in all countries were significantly bigger in 1981 than 13 years later, except the European country which is Denmark where difference between two years approximately 2 and the largest amount is in 1994 year. State of divorces is not similar, there is only USA and Denmark where numbers 13 years earlier are higher, in UK, Japan, Finland, Germany and Italy it is the other way around. There is one country is different from others, where counts are remain steady. In both illustrations USA had the largest rates, while Italy had considerably gap from the remaining states in the figure of dissolutions.
Two
given
bar charts provide information about marriages and divorces for eight
different
countries
in 1981 and 1994.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
seen
that statistics of marriages
dramatically
higher than divorces.
However
, almost in every
country
figures of weddings were larger in 1981, for annulments numbers are various.

As it presented, quantity of marriages in all
countries
were
significantly
bigger in 1981 than 13 years later, except the European
country
which is Denmark where difference between two years approximately 2 and the largest amount is in 1994 year.

State of divorces is not similar, there is
only
USA and Denmark where numbers 13 years earlier are higher, in UK, Japan, Finland, Germany and Italy it is the other way around. There is one
country
is
different
from others, where counts are
remain
steady. In both illustrations USA had the largest rates, while Italy had
considerably
gap from the remaining states in the figure of
dissolutions
.
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