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The two charts comparison report introduction and overall

The two charts comparison report introduction and overall 9wr37
The given two charts compares the data about the percentage of the production of energy from various sources over an eighteen-year period between 1985 and 2003Overall, it's clear that, although experiencing a significant downward trend, the production of oil kept its dominant position till the end. On the other hand, by experiencing the most increase among the other types of energy productions natural gas took one of the popular productions in the end.
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of energy from various sources over an eighteen-year period between 1985 and 2003Overall, it's
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that, although experiencing a significant downward trend, the
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IELTS academic The two charts comparison report introduction and overall

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