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WRITING TASK 1: The chart shows the information about the student numbers at primary schools in 2008. Summarise the information and make comparisons where relevant. You should write about 100 words *

WRITING TASK 1: The chart shows the information about the student numbers at primary schools in 2008. xxd79
The bar charts illustrate the figures of students at primary school in 2008. Overall, while the number of boy students in Percival is the higher than girls, in Roysters School have the number of the female lareger than the male, respectively. In addition, both St James School and Bilsing School have the number of boy and girl students is the same. In 2008, Percival School have about 80 boy students, which is higher than Roysters School at nearly 60 people. In contrast, the figures of the female in Percival School is approximately 40 pupils, this is less than half in Roysters School at about 80 pupils. The figures of male pupils in St James School is equal with female's number at close 100 students, five times larger than the number in the Bilsing School.
The bar charts illustrate the figures of
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in 2008.
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, while the
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number
of boy
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students
in Percival is the higher than girls, in
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Roysters
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School
have the
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number
of the female
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lareger
than the male,
respectively
.
In addition
, both St James
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School
and
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Bilsing
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School
have the
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number
of boy and girl
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students
is the same.

In 2008, Percival
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School
have about 80 boy
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students
, which is higher than
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Roysters
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School
at
nearly
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In
contrast, the figures of the female in Percival
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School
is approximately 40 pupils, this is less than half in
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Roysters
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at about 80 pupils.

The figures of male pupils in St James
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is equal with female's
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at close 100
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students
, five times larger than the
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number
in the
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Bilsing
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School
.
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IELTS academic WRITING TASK 1: The chart shows the information about the student numbers at primary schools in 2008.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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