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The given pie charts shows the expenses of a school in UK in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The given pie charts shows the expenses of a school in UK in 1981, 1991 and 2001. xxdlN

The given pie charts illustrate the annual expenses of a school in United Kindom, in the years 1981, 1991 and 2001, for five different sectors. According to the graph, it is clearly visible that the school has allocated the highest proportion to pay salaries. In all three years, they have spent the largest percentage to pay wages of the teachers which was half of the total in 1991. The payments for other workers was the second-highest in 1981 and 1991 with 28% and 22% respectively. As can be seen, it further reduced to 15% in 2001. Similarly, expenditures for resources gradually decreased with years where 15% of expenses in 1981 was lowered to 9% at the end of 2001. Conversely, even though the least spendings showed on insurance, the percentage of 2% in 1981 has tripled in 2001. The school has spent 23% on furniture and equipment which was significantly dropped in 1991 to 5%. In 1981, it received 15%. Overall, the money used for teachers' salaries, furniture, and equipment fluctuated during the three years though the school increased portion for the insurance continuously.

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given
 pie charts illustrate the annual expenses of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
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Kindom
, in the years 1981, 1991 and 2001, for five This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 sectors.

According to the graph, it is clearly
 visible that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 has allocated the highest proportion to pay salaries. In all three years, they have spent the largest percentage to pay wages of the teachers which was half of the total in 1991.

The payments for other workers was the second-highest in 1981 and 1991 with 28% and 22% respectively
. As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
, it further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to 15% in 2001.

Similarly
, expenditures for resources gradually
 decreased with It is better to use 'years' with the time-relative pronoun 'when': "years when". (Alternatively, use 'in/on which')years when
years where
 15% of expenses in 1981 was lowered
 to 9% at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2001.

Conversely
, even though
 the least Possible spelling mistake found.spending
spendings
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 on insurance, the percentage of 2% in 1981 has tripled in 2001. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 has spent 23% on furniture and equipment which was significantly
 dropped in 1991 to 5%. In 1981, it received 15%.

Overall
, the money This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for teachers' salaries, furniture, and equipment fluctuated during the three years though the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 increased portion for the insurance continuously
. 