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the table shows the househlod expenditure in Britain and Hong Kong in 2000

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THe table compares the percentage of spending on 6 different categoriesin British families and Hong Kong families in 2000. Overall, it can be seen that both nations spent the vast majority of their budget for other goods and services, food and housing. Looking at the details, British families spent more slightly higher than Hong Kong families on other goods and services with 36% and 28% respectively. Interestingly, the budget for food in Hong Kong accouted for 27% as opposed to the lower figure in the UK making up 22%. As reagards transport, the percentage of spending in the UK was nearly twice as high as that in Hong KOng with the figures being 17% and 9% respectively. Meanwhile, spending on housing in the UK was much less then that in Hong Kong with 18% and 32% respectively. Lastly, clothing was spent the least in both naions with 7% for the UK and just 4% for Hong Kong.

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 table compares the percentage of spending on 6 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
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categoriesin
 British You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
families
 and Hong Kong You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
families
 in 2000.

Overall
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seen
 that both nations spent the vast majority of their budget for other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 and services, food and housing.

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details
, British You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
families
 spent more slightly
 higher than Hong Kong You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
families
 on other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 and services with 36% and 28% respectively
. Interestingly
, the budget for food in Hong Kong Possible spelling mistake found.accountedaccostedaccouter
accouted
 for 27% as opposed to the lower figure in the UK making up 22%.

As Possible spelling mistake found.regards
reagards
 transport, the percentage of spending in the UK was nearly
 twice as high as that in If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Hong Kong
Hong KOng
 with the figures being 17% and 9% respectively
. Meanwhile, spending on housing in the UK was much less Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
then
 that in Hong Kong with 18% and 32% respectively
. Lastly
, clothing was spent
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naions
 with 7% for the UK and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 4% for Hong Kong. 