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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1 The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005. 0od9
The chart demonstrates data on the rate of ladies going into higher instruction in five nations for the a long time(1970 and 2005). It is clear that nearly all countries have the percent of female leave their school to have a higher education have dramatic increase over 35 years except Canada which had no change. Canada and UK were 2 countries have the highest percent of female approaching higher education, both countries have nearly 60% but UK had a substantial climb from about 35% to closely 60% and Canada was still stable. USA had approximately 55% and there is a significant rise between 1970 and 2005. Japan was the country have the lowest percent which was nearly 40% but there was still a big change from 1970 to 2005. Germany had almost 55% of women going to advanced education and had a slightly rise between 1970 to 2005 and place the fourth in five nations.
The chart demonstrates data on the rate of ladies going into higher instruction in five nations for
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the a
long time(1970 and 2005).

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nearly
all
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countries
have the percent of female
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leave
their school to have a higher education have dramatic increase over 35 years except Canada which had no
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change
.

Canada and UK were 2
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countries
have the highest percent of female approaching higher education, both
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countries
have
nearly
60%
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but
UK had a substantial climb from about 35% to
closely
60% and Canada was
still
stable. USA had approximately 55% and there is a significant rise between 1970 and 2005.

Japan was the
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country
have the lowest percent which was
nearly
40%
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but
there was
still
a
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change
from 1970 to 2005. Germany had almost 55% of women going to
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advanced
education and had a
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slightly rise
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1970 and 2005".
between 1970 to 2005
and place the fourth in five nations.
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IELTS academic WRITING TASK 1 The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.