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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1 The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005. 0od9

The chart demonstrates data on the rate of ladies going into higher instruction in five nations for the a long time(1970 and 2005). It is clear that nearly all countries have the percent of female leave their school to have a higher education have dramatic increase over 35 years except Canada which had no change. Canada and UK were 2 countries have the highest percent of female approaching higher education, both countries have nearly 60% but UK had a substantial climb from about 35% to closely 60% and Canada was still stable. USA had approximately 55% and there is a significant rise between 1970 and 2005. Japan was the country have the lowest percent which was nearly 40% but there was still a big change from 1970 to 2005. Germany had almost 55% of women going to advanced education and had a slightly rise between 1970 to 2005 and place the fourth in five nations.

The chart demonstrates data on the rate of ladies going into higher instruction in five nations for Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "a" is left.thea
the a
 long time(1970 and 2005).

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that nearly
 all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 have the percent of female This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 their school to have a higher education have dramatic increase over 35 years except Canada which had no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
.

Canada and UK were 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 have the highest percent of female approaching higher education, both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 have nearly
 60% This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 UK had a substantial climb from about 35% to closely
 60% and Canada was still
 stable. USA had approximately 55% and there is a significant rise between 1970 and 2005.

Japan was the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 have the lowest percent which was nearly
 40% This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there was still
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 from 1970 to 2005. Germany had almost 55% of women going to 'Going to' requires the base form: "advance"advance
advanced
 education and had a You used an adverb ('slightly') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('rise') instead of another adjective.
slightly rise
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1970 and 2005".between 1970 and 2005
between 1970 to 2005
 and place the fourth in five nations. 