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writing task 1 : rain water diagram

writing task 1 : rain water diagram PMBgE

The given diagram demonstrates how an Australian town collects rainwater to process in order to use as drinking water. As be can be observed, rainwater is collected from the roof and can be used for drinking after experienced a series of steps. The initial step illustrates that the rain which falls on the rooftop is collected by the gutter and runs down the pipe at the side of the house to the drain at the bottom. Subsequently, rainwater is passed along then is filtered and removed any impurities by filtered water before moving to the storage tank. From this point, the water transfers from storage to the water treatment. At the step of the process, water is treated with chemicals in order to make it fit for consumption. Once water is ready for drinking, it travels along pipes that lead back into the house in the Australian town in which people can use for daily consumption.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagram demonstrates how an Australian town collects rainwater to process in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 as drinking water.

As be can be observed
, rainwater is collected
 from the roof and can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for drinking after experienced a series of steps.

The initial step illustrates that the rain which falls on the rooftop is collected
 by the gutter and runs down the pipe at the side of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 to the drain at the bottom. Subsequently
, rainwater is passed
 along then is filtered
 and removed any impurities by filtered You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 moving to the storage tank. From this point, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 transfers from storage to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 treatment. At the step of the process, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is treated
 with chemicals in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it fit for consumption. Once You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 is ready for drinking, it travels along pipes that lead back into the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 in the Australian town in which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 for daily consumption. 