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The tabke chart compares the data of milk and butter consumption by age groups.

The tabke chart compares the data of milk and butter consumption by age groups. bQRx6
The ostensible table chart details the informatiin about the milk and butter utilization by four distinct age groups on the basis of low amd full fat. The given data has been calibrated in mili- litres and percentage. Having a clear glance, it can be seen that under 25 aged individuals consumed 1200 ml milk and 12g butter with a considerable difference in between the full and low fat by 59 % and 41% also 60% and 40 % orderly. Whereas, the highest energy liquid drink (milk) was utilized by older one's with 1900ml and that was followed by 26-45 with 1650ml spending and by 45-65 with 1670ml. The proportion of more higher fat was regarded to middled age group 45-65 with 45% figure and the least percentage of fat was the highest in both young and elders except middle level. Turning to the remaining information, it can be witnessed that 30g butter was used by 65± and that quantity figure was uplifted in 45 - 65 age group with 60g. Nearly 50 of both kinds fat were utilized by 45 -65 and 65± individuals, Whilst 60% and 38% full fat or 40% and 62%low fat was corrrespondingly regardless to <25 and 26-45. Looking from an overall perspective, it can be readily apparent that senior onus consumed more milk and middle aged utilized more butter, On the contrary the percentage of fat is varies according to age groups.
The ostensible table chart
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details
the
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informatiin
about the
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milk
and
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butter
utilization by four distinct
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age
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groups
on the basis of low
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amd
full
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fat
. The
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given
data has
been calibrated
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mili
-
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litres
and percentage.

Having a
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clear
glance, it can be
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seen
that under 25 aged individuals consumed 1200 ml
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milk
and 12g
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butter
with a considerable difference in between the full and low
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fat
by 59 % and 41%
also
60% and 40 % orderly. Whereas, the highest energy liquid drink
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(milk)
was utilized
by older one's with 1900ml and that
was followed
by 26-45 with 1650ml spending and by 45-65 with 1670ml. The proportion of
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more higher
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fat
was regarded
to
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middled
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age
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group
45-65 with 45% figure and the least percentage of
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fat
was the highest in both young and elders except middle level.

Turning to the remaining information, it can
be witnessed
that 30g
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butter
was
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used
by 65± and that quantity figure
was uplifted
in
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45 - 65
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age
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group
with 60g.
Nearly
50 of both kinds
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fat
were utilized
by 45 -65 and 65± individuals, Whilst 60% and 38% full
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fat
or 40% and 62%low
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fat
was
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corrrespondingly
regardless to <25 and 26-45.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, it can be
readily
apparent that senior onus consumed more
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milk
and
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middle aged
utilized more
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butter
,
On the contrary
the percentage of
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fat
is varies according to
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age
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groups
.
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