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The diagram calibrate the manufacturing of frozen pies and potatoes. It involving sereval process of manufactured. Overall, the process start with two separate lines. one for potatoes and other one for meat pie. Potatoes making process start with cleaning and it delivered upto thirty days. However, meat process start with prepared ketchup and it end with stored and dispatch. Firstly, I illustrate the process of potatoes. Potatoes cleaned with the help of water and cleanser. Clean potatoes peel off by peeling instrument. After peeling it convert into small slice. These slices boiled in water. it take out from boiler and spread in containers for chilling. Those chilled potatoes wrapped by labour. It stored into cooling place for there stability for 4 weeks. Moreover, Fish pies manufactured process begins with prepared sauce and peas for great taste. Those fish pie underscore for healthy eating. It turn to remove the harness of fish is that skins and bones. Furthermore, Citrus like lemon juice applied on pies for there freshness and salt for taste. Last stage of manufacturing is that meat steam with the help of oven. At last but not the least fish pie stored and delivery to customers in timing of less than half day

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take
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 with prepared sauce and peas for great taste. Those fish pie underscore for healthy eating. It Did you mean "turns"?turns
turn
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, Citrus like lemon juice applied on pies for there freshness and salt for taste. Last stage of manufacturing is that meat steam with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
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