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Writing Task 1 Natural Process The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words The given picture illustrates the life cyc

Writing Task 1 Natural Process The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee g5881

" The given picture illustrates the life cycle of the honey bee. There are six steps in the round, it takes 34-36 days from the form of egg to mature bee. After fertilization of two bees, everythree days, female can lay one or two eggs spending 9-10 days on hatching then. Next five days, egg is broken by nymph which mults 3 times before becoming young adult emerge. It takes 15-16 days, and at these three steps, not like the life cycle of the frog, the shape of the honey bee is the same, it just develop its size. Finally, 34-36 day - life cycle of honey bee finishes, now, bee looks like mature one and can fertilize and work. Due to the helpfullness of honey bee in our life, we have to protect them from harm. " (136 words)

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There are six steps in the round, it takes 34-36 days from the form of egg to mature bee.

After fertilization of two bees, Possible spelling mistake found.every three
everythree
 days, female can lay one or two eggs spending 9-10 days on hatching then. Next
 five days, egg is broken
 by nymph which Possible spelling mistake found.multicultsmeltsmulesmaltsmolts
mults
 3 times This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
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life
 cycle of the frog, the shape of the honey bee is the same, it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
Did you mean "develops"?develops
develop
 its size. Finally
, 34-36 day Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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life
 cycle of honey bee finishes, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, bee looks like mature one and can fertilize and work.

Due to the Possible spelling mistake found.helpfulnesshelp fullness
helpfullness
 of honey bee in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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