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The table and pie charts give information about Ashdown Museum before and after its refurbishment in terms of visitor number and degree of satisfaction

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There are two figures, one is the table depicting total number of people visited to the Ashdown museum and other is pie chart describing results of surveys of visitors satisfaction before and after refurbishment of Ashdown museum. Overall, the maximum people visited to the museum after its repairment than before. Besides this, major proportionof people were very satisfied after its refurbishment, while before its development, the most of the vistors were dissastisfied with museum. After refurbishment, 92 thousand people visited to the museum in which 40% people were satisfied with its construction, had contributed the largest portion of the figure, 35% were very satisfied and very few people were seen dissatisfied. Similarly, before refurbishment, 30% visitors were satisfied and majority of visitors were dissatisfied. On comparing, there was one tenth increase in number of visitors after refurbishment. However, the ratio of satisfied people was declined from 40% to 15% throughout the period. Also, no major fluctuation could be seen in ratio of very dissatisfied people over the period.
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