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City hospitality

City hospitality VB003

The two maps demonstrate road access to a city hospital in years 2007 and 2010. Allocated area to city hospital, city road, and ring road did not have a remarkable difference in 2007 and 2010. However, number of accesses to city hospital doubled through separation staff car park from public car park. On of the discrepances between these two maps is converting two junctions in 2007 into two squares in 2010. these two squares were in the junction of hospital road with ring and city roads. Furthermore, hospital road were moved to a specified area in the western side of hospital road in 2010. New bus station also connected to two squares across two short distance roads. The other intriguing point is enlarging the space for car park by separating public car park from staff car park in 2010. In this year, public car park was constructed in the eastern side of city hospital with a distinct enterance to the hospital. staff car park had no difference compared to 2007, and it was still placed in the southern area of city hospital.

The two maps demonstrate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 access to a city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 in years 2007 and 2010.

Allocated area to city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
, city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, and ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 did not have a remarkable difference in 2007 and 2010. However
, number of accesses to city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 doubled through separation staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 from public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 park.

On of the Possible spelling mistake found.discrepancies
discrepances
 between these two maps is converting two junctions in 2007 into two squares in 2010. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThese
these
 two squares were in the junction of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 with ring and city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
. Furthermore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to a specified area in the western side of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 in 2010. New bus station also
 connected to two squares across two short distance roads.

The other intriguing point is enlarging the space for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 by separating public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 from staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 in 2010. In this year, public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
was constructed
 in the eastern side of city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 with a distinct Possible spelling mistake found.entrance
enterance
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterStaff
staff
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car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 had no difference compared to 2007, and it was still
 placed in the southern area of city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
. 