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Writing Task 1: Domestic access to modern technology in UK

Writing Task 1: Domestic access to modern technology in UK RNXVY

The line graph provides information about the private use of Internet, PC, Mobile phone and CD player in the UK from 1996 to 2003. Overall, the general trend of four elements in the study was upward over the period shown. Moreover, CD player gained the highest proportion in domestic access while the lowest was the Internet. In 1996, domestic access to CD player are 60% and continued to rise gradually to about 70% in 1998, in which witnessed the advent of Internet with the figure being recorded as over 10%. From the 1998 onwards, the proportion of internet access was increased rapidly and rocketed at approximately 50% in 2002/2003 but still lower than other modes of modern technology. On the other hand, the mobile phone’s usage started with the lower percentage at 18% usage in comparison with home computer. However, it climbed sharply to 70% usage by 2003, surpassing home computers at the beginning of 1999. It is noticeable that the modern technology access in homes in UK was increased steadily from 1996 to 2003 and the most popular device at that time was CD player.

The line graph provides information about the private This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of Internet, PC, Mobile phone and CD You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
 in the UK from 1996 to 2003.

Overall
, the general trend of four elements in the study was upward over the period shown. Moreover
, CD You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
 gained the highest proportion in domestic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentryconnectionapproach
access
 while the lowest was the Internet.

In 1996, domestic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentryconnectionapproach
access
 to CD You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
 are 60% and continued to rise gradually
 to about 70% in 1998, in which witnessed the advent of Internet with the figure being recorded
 as over 10%. From the 1998 onwards, the proportion of internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentryconnectionapproach
access
was increased
rapidly
 and rocketed at approximately 50% in 2002/2003 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
still
 lower than other modes of modern technology.

On the other hand
, the mobile phone’s usage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with the lower percentage at 18% usage in comparison
 with home computer. However
, it climbed sharply
 to 70% usage by 2003, surpassing home computers at the beginning of 1999.

It is noticeable that the modern technology You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentryconnectionapproach
access
 in homes in UK was increased
steadily
 from 1996 to 2003 and the most popular device at that time was CD You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
. 