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The pie charts demonstrate the ratio of the energy produced from varied sources in a country from 1985 to 2003. The data is given in percentage.

The pie charts demonstrate the ratio of the energy produced from varied sources in a country from 1985 to 2003. The data is given in percentage. 0AdaO
The pie charts demonstrate the ratio of the energy produced from varied sources in a country from 1985 to 2003. The data is given in percentage. To initiate, it is manifest from the graph that approximately more than a half (52%) of energy was produced from the oil in 1985 and it was highest among the other sources. On the contrary, the second highest was nuclear at just above a fifth (22%) in 1985. Interestingly, both sources showed a decline, oil by 13% and nuclear by 5%, respectively. Energy produced from the natural gas was at 13% in 1985, but afterwards it had experienced a drastic rose to 23% in 2003. However, the other energy sources had generated the least amount of power. Coal had produced around 8% of energy, then it escalated by 5% in the year of 2003, whereas the other renewable was just only 1%, but it rose to 4% in 2003. In contrast, Hydrogen shared the same percent of energy generated around 4% in 18 years. Overall, it is seen that the highest percent of energy produced from oil, nuclear and natural gas, while other energy sources generated the least in the given period.
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in a country from 1985 to 2003. The data is
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energy
was
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produced
from the oil in 1985 and it was highest among the
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other
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sources
.
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, the second highest was nuclear at
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above a fifth (22%) in 1985.
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a decline, oil by 13% and nuclear by 5%,
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from the natural gas was at 13% in 1985,
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afterwards it had experienced a drastic rose to 23% in 2003.

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, the
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had generated the least amount of power. Coal had
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produced
around 8% of
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energy
, then it escalated by 5% in the year of 2003, whereas the
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renewable was
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1%,
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it rose to 4% in 2003.
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, Hydrogen shared the same percent of
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generated around 4% in 18 years.

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, it is
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that the highest percent of
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from oil, nuclear and natural gas, while
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generated the least in the
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IELTS academic The pie charts demonstrate the ratio of the energy produced from varied sources in a country from 1985 to 2003. The data is given in percentage.

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