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the diagram presents the process of making smoked fish

the diagram presents the process of making smoked fish LrVE1

The provided diagram demonstrates the process of making smoked fish. It has ten steps. Overall, it is crystal clear that the process of making smoked fish has undergone various steps. Absence of any single step may halt the entire process. To begin with, in the first step, the fishes are caught, and afterthat the fishes are frozen. In the following step, the fishes are thawed as well as dipped in the fresh water for five minutes. After five minutes, the fish is cut open. After the cutting of same, the fishes are put in salt water, and added the yellow colour in salt water. In the next step, the fishes are smoked atleast for 30 minutes. After smoking the fishes, the fishes are packed for sending to cold storage. Lastly, the fishes are distributed in various shops for commercial use.

The provided diagram demonstrates the process of making smoked fish. It has ten steps.

Overall
, it is crystal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the process of making smoked fish has undergone various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
. Absence of any single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 may halt the entire process.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, in the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, the fishes are caught
, and Possible spelling mistake found.after that
afterthat
 the fishes are frozen
. In the following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, the fishes are thawed
as well
 as dipped in the fresh water for five minutes. After five minutes, the fish is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 open. After the cutting of same, the fishes are put
 in salt water, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 the yellow Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 in salt water. In the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, the fishes are smoked
Possible spelling mistake found.at least
atleast
 for 30 minutes.

After smoking the fishes, the fishes are packed
 for sending to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 storage. Lastly
, the fishes are distributed
 in various shops for commercial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. 