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Writing task 1. about Everague annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services, 2001 to 2010

Writing task 1. about Everague annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services, 2001 to 2010 lqBdo

The graph indicate median yearly expenses on mobile phone and Residential services from 2001 t0 2010. In general, the mobile phone services climbed remakably. In contras the residential phone services decreased considerably. In details, spending began by marely $200 of on cell phone services in 2001. Then from 2002 to 2003 this figure rise slowly to little more than $300. Beside that on cell phone services expences dramatically declined, to $600 in 2007. Next, In 2001 spending oh Residential phone services decrease below $700. While in 2002 to 2006 the amount of annual expenditure on the Residential phone service was down $600, and then between 2007 and 2008 this gigure derease again to about $480. Finally in 2009 to 2010 cost of on Residential phone service still down been $400.

The graph Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "indicates".indicates
indicate
 median yearly expenses on mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresidentiary
Residential
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
Nonstandard phrase. Did you mean: "from 2001 to 2010"?from 2001 to 2010
from 2001 t0 2010
. In general
, the mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 climbed Possible spelling mistake found.remarkably
remakably
. In Possible spelling mistake found.contrastcontra
contras
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresidentiary
residential
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 decreased considerably
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, spending began by Possible spelling mistake found.earlymainlynearlyrarelyMarymerely
marely
 $200 of on cell You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 in 2001. Then from 2002 to 2003 this figure rise slowly
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 more than $300. Beside that on cell You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
Possible spelling mistake found.expenses
expences
dramatically
 declined, to $600 in 2007. Next
,

In 2001 spending oh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresidentiary
Residential
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 decrease below $700. While in 2002 to 2006 the amount of annual expenditure on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresidentiary
Residential
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
 was down $600, and then between 2007 and 2008 this Possible spelling mistake found.figure
gigure
Possible spelling mistake found.decreasedeceasedegrease
derease
 again to about $480. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 in 2009 to 2010 cost of on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresidentiary
Residential
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
still
 down been $400. 