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Everage annual expenditures on call phone and residential from services in 2001 to 2010

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As you can see in the graph indicates median yearly expenses on mobile phone and Residential services from 2001 to 2010. In general, the mobile phone services climbed remarkably. In contrasr the residential phone services decreased considerably. The details, spending began by Mary $200 of on cell phone services in 2001. Then from 2002 to 2003 this figure rise slowly to tiny more than $300. Beside that on cell phone services expenses dramatically declined, to $600 in 2007. Then, in 2008 to 2009 amount of annual expenditure on the mobile phone increases again been $700. In 2001 spending oh Residential phone services decrease below $700. While in 2002 to 2006 the amount of annual expenditure on the Residential phone service was down $600, and then between 2007 and 2008 this figure degreases again to about $480. Finally, in 2009 to 2010 cost of on Residential phone service nevertheless down been $400.
As you can
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in the graph indicates median yearly expenses on mobile
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phone
and
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Residential
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services
from 2001 to 2010.
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, the mobile
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phone
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services
climbed
remarkably
. In
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phone
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services
decreased
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.

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, spending began by Mary $200 of on cell
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phone
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in 2001. Then from 2002 to 2003 this figure rise
slowly
to tiny more than $300. Beside that on cell
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phone
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expenses
dramatically
declined, to $600 in 2007. Then, in 2008 to 2009 amount of annual expenditure on the mobile
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phone
increases again been $700.

In 2001 spending oh
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Residential
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phone
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decrease below $700. While in 2002 to 2006 the amount of annual expenditure on the
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Residential
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phone
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service
was down $600, and then between 2007 and 2008 this figure degreases again to about $480.
Finally
, in 2009 to 2010 cost of on
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Residential
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phone
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nevertheless
down been $400.
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IELTS academic Everage annual expenditures on call phone and residential from services in 2001 to 2010

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