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Exports in Various Categories

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The chart illustrates about the Exports Earnings of one country’s in 5 categories product were in 2015 and 2016. ​Overall, Exports Earnings of petroleum product in 2016 was highest around $64 billions, while petroleum product in 2015 was highest around $61. ​ In contrast to Exports Earning of petroleum product in 2015, in 2016 larger by $3 billion in petroleum product. ​In comparison with Exports Earning of engineered goods in 2015, in 2016 larger by $8 billion in engineered goods. ​Exports Earning of game and jewellery in 2015 is greater than game and jewellery in 2016 ​In contrast to Exports Earning of agricultural products in 2015, in 2016 larger around $1 billion in agricultural products. ​Exports Earning of textiles in 2015 is smaller than textiles in 2016.
The chart illustrates about the
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Exports
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Earnings
of one country’s in 5 categories
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product
were in 2015 and 2016.

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Overall
,
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Exports
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Earnings
of
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petroleum
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product
in 2016 was
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around $64
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billions
, while
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petroleum
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product
in 2015 was
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highest
around $61.

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to
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of
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petroleum
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product
in 2015, in 2016 larger by $3
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billion
in
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petroleum
product.

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with
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Earning
of engineered
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goods
in 2015, in 2016 larger by $8
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billion
in engineered
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goods
.

​Exports
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of game and
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jewellery
in 2015 is greater than game and
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jewellery
in 2016

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to
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of agricultural
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products
in 2015, in 2016 larger around $1
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billion
in agricultural products.

​Exports
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Earning
of textiles in 2015 is smaller than textiles in 2016.
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IELTS academic Exports in Various Categories

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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