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The diagram explains the way in which manner is use for chocolate making process and what factors are affected for fix the chocolate price. Overall, The diagram are divided in ten different steps. First step is a Cocoa grinding for basic need for chocolate making process and last step are dividing in two parts. One it is direct eat chocolate and second is use for food powder. In this diagram first of all input the needed ingredients and after second step in the useless ingredients are throw in wasted. And Survivors marital are converting in the liquor form. And then this liquor form are transfer in two different Container. After first container in add sugar and some butter for made the chocolate and last Container In the saleable chocolates are preparing. And lastly the survivors material is used as food powder. Chocolate price Decision in the affected five factors. First of all, cost of ingredients and overhead expenses at 37%. Second Majorly point is a supermarket changes at 34%. And then less factors are affected for tax, chocolate company and farms at 15%, 10% and 4%.

The diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 the way in which manner is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 for chocolate making process and what factors are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the chocolate price.

Overall
, The diagram are divided
 in ten This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearly
First
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 is a Cocoa grinding for basic need for chocolate making process and last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 are dividing in two parts. One it is direct eat chocolate and second is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 for food powder.

In this diagram This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
 input the needed ingredients and after second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 in the useless ingredients are throw in wasted. And Survivors marital are converting in the liquor form. And then this liquor form are transfer in two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Possible agreement error. The noun 'Container' seems to be countable, so consider using: "containers".Containers
Container
. After You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearly
first
 container in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 sugar and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 butter for made the chocolate and last Container In the Possible spelling mistake found.salablesale able
saleable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdessertconfectionsnackcandychocolate
chocolates
 are preparing. And lastly
 the survivors material is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as food powder.

Chocolate price Decision in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 five factors. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, cost of ingredients and overhead expenses at 37%. Second Majorly
 point is a supermarket This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 at 34%. And then Did you mean "fewer"? The noun factors is countable.fewer
less
 factors are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 for tax, chocolate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and farms at 15%, 10% and 4%. 