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The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education D2lgk

The charts depict adult education in which the reasons for joining and people's estimation of the educational expense. Overall, seven different aspects inspired people to study in which subject interest is the priority which the least is to meet new individuals. Moreover, many people think the cost for it should be shared by individuals. In the bar chart, 40% of adults are decided to participate in education due to their increased interest in the subject and this followed by some are to get a good qualification at 38%. In addition, around one-fifth of people suggest, it is an easy way to get a current job, a promotion and enjoying learning. Whereas others are encouraged because to change job and able to make new friends at 12%, 9% respectively. Secondly, in the pie chart, as per pupils, three factors are involved in the course cost. 40% are paid by the individuals and the employer ought to share one-third of the total amount. Similarly, the taxpayer should share a quarter.

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's estimation of the educational expense.

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meet
 new individuals. Moreover
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some
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good
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people
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get
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 job, a promotion and enjoying learning. Whereas others

are encouraged
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because
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 new friends at 12%, 9% respectively
.

Secondly
, in the pie chart, as per pupils, three factors are involved
 in the course cost. 40% are paid
 by the individuals and the employer ought to share one-third of the total amount. Similarly
, the taxpayer should share a quarter. 